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Thursday, January 20, 2011

Final Message, Pain, Misery part two (incomplete, due to time)

A metal clattering again each other roar loudly. A voice said, "Stupid kid, trying to kill himself just to escape from reality. Good thing we manage to reach him in time and save him. If we were another few minute late, he would been dead."
Another voice said, "Yes, I completely agree with you. Teenager those day are to wild and doesn't think about their action at all." Beep, the strange metal clattering sound again.

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The noisy metal work work me up abruptly. "Where am i?' I thought to myself as I swiftly check my surrounding. 'A hospital room? Weird, and my head hurts' In this moment, a tall lady wearing a purple dress and a red ring approach me.
"Well well, look who is finally awake after sleeping for an week. Mr. [give him a name, i will edit and give him a name later], I hope you realize that you are an very special customer to us. Please don't go dieing off like that. It will cause us trouble since our contract is not complete yet."
*To be continue*

Teen should not be allow to vote

Voting age has always been a problem. In 1971, congress pass down the 26th amendment which change the voting age from 21 to 18 (Here). Before that, voting age minimum was 21, but why was the 26th amendment proposed to the constitution and

Thursday, January 13, 2011

The uses of "May" and "Might" in a debate

Andy Li, a classmate, who is very intelligence and creative thinker said that:
"Too many 'may's or 'might's make the response to the question seem inaccurate."(here, Par.1)
This is his response to David W. Breneman about how he think that this person is right and rarely uses "May" or "Might" in his writing, and I agree that in his writing, he rarely uses "May" or "Might" but that does not mean that too many of them make the response to a question seem inaccurate.

May will sometime refer to the facts that your just predicting the possibility of something happen and it is in your favor, one way or another.  However, that doesn't meant that using it a lot will make a response to a question seem inaccurate. You can say that the uses of the word "May" is blah blah blah blah...

Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Final Message, Pain, Misery (Part 1 of a FICTIONAL Story)

I just argue with my mom... it been a while since this topic is bought up. It almost two years now thinking back about how it had started. My mom start to believe in religion, a Buddhist religion. I used to like that religion, but came to curse it. My life at home was turn around cause of it. After that incident, I hated this religion so much that I came to almost hate anyone that just mention it. My facial expression may not reveal anything, but I will say, "Shut up, and don't talk about that religion again." This is because I had lost my freedom in my house, the place in which I am suppose to have the most freedom. To me now, it is just a place that is agonizing to be in.

Supposedly, I am just suppose to have my own room. I HAD my own room for 2 years in this house, however, my mom took away the privilege of having my own room and she change it into some of her religious-happy-little-world to be in every night. It is not my room anymore. I do not have a room. I now study in the hallway, which is fine until I came to ASTI. At the hallway, I can almost hear everything happening in my house and I can really never fully concentrate in trying to study. It just break my focus every now and then. This is why life suck, this is why screw religion, this is why I should just kill myself and end the misery that I am having. Maybe I will just kill myself and get over it as my brain slowly suffocate because not enough oxygen-rich blood coming because I have took a knife and made a big cut. This is my final message: I just wish for once that I had experience a normal life, with friends and made funs experience as you experience the world.


*Author note: I am currently busy with my life...ill write this later... in the week... expect it soon... and thank you for everyone's concern, but I want to make it clear that I am fine and there's no need to worry about me. This is just a story I'm working on.*

Does it matter where you go to college?

After reading all of the debate about college, I feel that most of them seem like a bluff without any proof to back them up.

Anthony P.Carnevale ,a research professor, and the director of the Georgetown University Center on Education and the Workforce.

He wrote:
"Graduation rates in the top 100 colleges exceed 90 percent compared with less than 40 percent at the least prestigious four year colleges and all community colleges. And among equally qualified students --those who score 1200 out of a possible 1600 on the SAT -- 96 percent of those who go to the selective colleges graduate, while those who go to the least selective four-year colleges graduate at a rate of 78 percent."(Carnevale, Par.2)

If you have check his website then you will notice that there aren't any link to support his numbers of data. In other word, without support you can just take off those number away. Without those numbers then his debate seem to be one of the he doesn't know what is he talking about type of debate, and those who just bluff their way through stuff. His thesis is at that level... unless he actually provide information that could back up his data with those number. I have tried to locate where those data came from, but no luck so far so unless he doesn't provide the location of those data then he is just bluffing.

I do agree with him, however, that going to top 100 college seem like a better idea because they aren't just top college without a reason (either they get there through bribery or the ability of the school, that I do not know), but they does seem like a good bet, but the question is why does it seem like a good bet? This, I think, is because parent has been talking about getting to one of the top 100 colleges in the US and the children are being influence. Most student that are trying to get into one of the top 100 colleges, if you ask them why, it will be very hard for them to try to answer you. In the end, it all just discrinimation and ignorant because the parent decide to just trust what the magazine is telling you and not take their time browsing through every college to find what is best for their child.

Saturday, December 11, 2010

A child call "it

I have discuss about "A child call 'it'" with some of my classmate. I have found out many things that I will      [a) never notice by myself. I feel that if I haven't have this discussion and listen to what other people have to   [s) say, then I will never be able to get out of thinking inside the book stage. A child call it is basically about a [s) kid getting abuse by his mother. It is the 3rd worse case in the whole US. The story is told through the eye [ ]of the child and his experiences and thought (and some fillers) which he just add and I believe is a bunch of [e] bullshit other than using it as the purpose of adding something like a sense of humor (which the story barely h[l]ave any in my own opinion). The story is very realistic and the description of the torture was totally... bel[o]ievable, but not completely the best. After reading past chapter 6 and planning to read chapter 7 after this[h] and listening to my classmate opinion, I have come up with some conclusion about this book.

Dave, was torture by his mother and he had a horrible childhood due to that, but it still didn't explain why his Mother beat him up. Is there any real specific reasons? Is she just mentally insane and just want to beat up a kid? Is she just a weird perverted person who take pleasure from beating up kid in one of the most horrible ways? In order to answer those question you must first look at her action: It is said in chapter two in the book that his mother was very kind to him, but then the start of chapter is basically where he start to get torture. It all start out with how she will lie down in the couch and ask her children (which she have five including the author) to look for an item that she had lost and she would sometime beat up them if they couldn't find it. That is the start of it. What was the trigger of this unusual behavior? Is she going to turn back into the kind mother? It is later said in the book (I don't really know which part) that the author dad and mom will sometime drink Alcohol at 3:00 pm. This gave us proof that the parent is alcoholic, but because the mother was alcoholic and with my own prior knowledge I can guess that the trigger of the unusual behavior is something happen that is related to the Alcohol problem that they have. When the mother would beat up the author, she didn't feel anything was wrong as she continue to hit him. This might show us that the author mom was perhaps receive the same treatment in the past. 


Saturday, December 4, 2010

BOOK BLOG POST

I think the blog discussion went really great because I manage to learn about a lot of stuff that i either misinterpret or never catches in the book. I think this is very significant and important because it let me improve my knowledge about what the book "A child call 'it'" by Dave Pelzer which is about how a child was getting abuse by his mother and describe his every day life of how his mom torture him such as making him skip dinner and breakfast and make him into a must think of what he should and would  do to get my lunch every day. hjn